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Revision as of 14:30, 13 February 2018

Judge Comments
Pyro Snorunt Pyro Pyro : / 50
Design Fun Creativity Aesthetics Functionality Skip Teleporter?
/ 15 / 10 / 15 / 5 / 5



JupiHornet JupiHornet JupiHornet : / 50
Design Fun Creativity Aesthetics Functionality
/ 15 / 10 / 15 / 5 / 5



Enjl Enjl Enjl : / 50
Design Fun Creativity Aesthetics Functionality Skip Teleporter?
/ 15 / 10 / 15 / 5 / 5



Garirry Garirry Garirry : / 50
Design Fun Creativity Aesthetics Functionality
/ 15 / 10 / 15 / 5 / 5
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ACESpark ACESpark ACESpark : / 50
Design Fun Creativity Aesthetics Functionality Skip Teleporter?
/ 15 / 10 / 15 / 5 / 5 




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Judge Comments
snoruntpyro snoruntpyro snoruntpyro : 37 / 50
Design Fun Creativity Aesthetics Functionality Skip Teleporter?
0 / 15 0 / 10 0 / 15 0 / 5 0 / 5 0



You know Mario—who could forget the cheery “woo-hoos!” of Nintendo’s most beloved video game character? Now meet Charles Martinet, the voice behind the iconic mustachioed man. It turns out, Martinet not only voiced Mario, he also created the voices for Wario, Luigi and even Donkey Kong!

JupiHornet JupiHornet JupiHornet : 34 / 50
Design Fun Creativity Aesthetics Functionality
0 / 15 0 / 10 0 / 15 0 / 5 0 / 5



Jump and fly your way through danger in this rhythm-based action platformer!

Prepare for a near impossible challenge in the world of Geometry Dash. Push your skills to the limit as you jump, fly and flip your way through dangerous passages and spiky obstacles.

Enjl Enjl Enjl : 14 / 50
Design Fun Creativity Aesthetics Functionality Skip Teleporter?
0 / 15 0 / 10 0 / 15 0 / 5 0 / 5 0



Wordy: There is a need for more careful inspection of all welds. Concise: You must inspect all welds more carefully. Inspect all welds more carefully.

Garirry Garirry Garirry : 45 / 50
Design Fun Creativity Aesthetics Functionality
0 / 15 0 / 10 0 / 15 0 / 5 0 / 5
insert myriad of swears here



This level was ok.

ACESpark ACESpark ACESpark : 12 / 50
Design Fun Creativity Aesthetics Functionality Skip Teleporter?
0 / 15 0 / 10 0 / 15 0 / 5 0 / 5 0



This book is largely concerned with Hobbits, and from its pages a reader may discover much of their character and a little of their history. Further information will also be found in the selection from the Red Book of Westmarch that has already been published, under the title of The Hobbit. That story was derived from the earlier chapters of the Red Book, composed by Bilbo himself, the first Hobbit to become famous in the world at large, and called by him There and Back Again, since they told of his journey into the East and his return: an adventure which later involved all the Hobbits in the great events of that Age that are here related.

Many, however, may wish to know more about this remarkable people from the outset, while some may not possess the earlier book. For such readers a few notes on the more important points are here collected from Hobbit-lore, and the first adventure is briefly recalled.



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